Each sentence in your answer should add a new idea. If a sentence says the same thing as an earlier one, cut it or change it to a new angle.
This lesson is part of structured and extended answers.
How do you detect a repeat?
Read each sentence and write one word for its idea in the margin. If two margin words match, one sentence is a repeat.
| Sentence | Margin word |
|---|---|
| “Cheating is dishonest.” | dishonest |
| “It is wrong to cheat.” | dishonest |
| “Other students lose out.” | fairness |
The second sentence adds nothing. The third adds a new idea.
Worked example
Scenario: Nizam finds out that a friend copied his project and handed it in as his own.
Repeated version: “Nizam should tell the teacher because copying is dishonest. Copying is wrong and it is not honest. Nizam should report it because it is a dishonest act.”
The three sentences all say that copying is dishonest.
Rewritten: “Nizam should first speak to his friend and ask him to tell the teacher himself, because honesty means owning what you did. If the friend refuses, Nizam should report it, because other students who worked hard would be treated unfairly. This also protects Nizam, since his own work might be blamed as the copy.”
Now the answer has three distinct ideas: honesty, fairness to classmates and protection for Nizam.
Where do new points come from?
Try these three prompts:
- Who else is affected, and how?
- What could happen later if nothing changes?
- Which second value supports the same action?
The mistake to avoid
Some students add a conclusion that only repeats the answer.
| Ending | Problem | Better |
|---|---|---|
| “So, Nizam should be honest.” | Repeats the first sentence | “This way, the class can trust that marks reflect real effort.” |
Check yourself
Find the repeat and rewrite: “Sara should apologise to her friend because apologising is the right thing to do. She should say sorry because that is what good friends do. An apology is important.”
Answer
All three sentences say that apologising is right. A rewrite with distinct points: “Sara should apologise to her friend because respect means admitting when she hurt someone. Her friend may still feel upset and need to hear that Sara understands. An apology can also open a chance to repair the friendship before the gap grows.”
The rewrite adds a value, the friend’s feelings and a future consequence.
What to study next
Continue with self-reviewing against a verified task rubric. For mixed questions, use the structured answers practice.
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